Written By Alarissa
Jan. 18, 2017, 11:40 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Written By Cordelia
Jan. 18, 2017, 11:10 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Dear Diary,
    I don't know what to say. I'm sitting here in the newly renovated Grimhall Longhouse, with more concerns than I have mental power to consider. Like pieces on a board, any action one way will more than likely have consequences elsewhere in the future. I'm glad Uncle Harald has come to Arx. I don't think I could handle all this on my own without going completely insane from the stress of it. I know I should be doing more, but anxiety and grief stills my hand. Already, friends have died in the face of all this uproar. It wasn't supposed to be like this. I was supposed to adventure across Arvum and beyond, maybe end up forced into some betrothal somewhere down the line, and then grow old while guiding my children to their own greatness. Maybe with a bit of extra adventure thrown in here and there for good measure. Instead, I'm being confronted by things and ideas that the whole of the Compact has regarded as impossible or unreal for centuries. I just don't know. I wished for excitement in my life, and now I've got more than I can reasonably handle. I need Father. I need the Sword of Grimhall. I need help.
Written By Anze
Jan. 18, 2017, 11:10 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Darren
I'm sorry.
Written By Cordelia
Jan. 18, 2017, 11:09 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Dear Diary,
    As I'm sure Father will learn anyway, I recently got into a sort of conflict with Prince Abbas, Reaver of Thrax. Clearly, I'm fated to make enemies of my childhood idols. So, back to the conflict. Asking Abbas for a favor, one thing lead to another, and he challenged me to a duel between longships. Muleheaded as I am, I not only accepted, but decided to oh so wisely decline my own champion. Long story short, I of course lost. Silver lining? Apparently some people believe I'm not only valorous, but I've got 'mettle.' Shockingly, one of these peoples happens to be a man of Thrax. I would have never thought I'd hear someone like him praise me for fighting. Perhaps there's still hope for Thrax yet.
Written By Cordelia
Jan. 18, 2017, 11:09 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Dear Diary,
    So you know how I sometimes let my emotions and impulses get the better of me? Well. I'm sure Donella hates me now. While out touring the market, I found her trying on clothes at...oh where was it now? Anyway, the place doesn't matter. What matters is I may have spoken poorly to some Grayson Prince or other in her presence, and I've been so busy lately with Voice matters and everything else that I haven't had a chance to speak with her. I feel like there's now a sort of divide between us, and it's all my fault.
Written By Calandra
Jan. 18, 2017, 10:16 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Ferrando
Written By Calandra
Jan. 18, 2017, 10:01 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Rymarr
Written By Calandra
Jan. 18, 2017, 9:56 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Juliet
Written By Calandra
Jan. 18, 2017, 9:55 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Bethany
Written By Ida
Jan. 18, 2017, 9:24 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Joscelin
Though I am not from the Lycene and make no judgments in that regard, I think I could kill my enemies with flowers, even as an Oathlander. I could just hold them in my fists. It seems a dreadful waste or something so pretty, but certainly doable I suppose. Maybe that's not /technically/ killing someone /with/ the flowers, but...close enough?
Written By Joscelin
Jan. 18, 2017, 9:12 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Ida
Well. I was going to say 'can you kill your enemies with flowers' but my father was Lycene. I know better than to say that out loud. Or write it down. Anywhere.
Written By Ida
Jan. 18, 2017, 9 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
However (while noting that I suspect this will not be an issue but better to be safe than sorry), no spears in my shop doorframe. Throwing a spear at the doorway of my room at the Valardin Manor will likely keep said thrower from leaving the manor or, really, breathing much longer in this life. Refraining from putting any sort of weaponry into doors I work or reside behind would be best. Should one feel the need to mark some sort of affectionate inclination, flowers would be perfectly acceptable.
Written By Jeremiah
Jan. 18, 2017, 8:16 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Simply: The Common Council must be organized by three Maxims. If the positions themselves are not appropriately representative? The Common Council will be worthless. If those holding the positions are not appropriately capable? The Common Council will be worthless. If the Common Council itself has neither rights nor powers? It will be worthless.
I write of Suitability most recently. The Council's members must be representative of specific people and organizations, for multiple reasons. It will be readily apparent if they are not--a silk-clad, jangling merchant had best not represent the Lower Burough. It will be obvious if the position is ill-suited.
The positions suggested are the Councilors of: the Lower Buroughs, the Upper Buroughs, the Lycene, the Oathlanders, the Northerners, the Crownlanders, the Islanders, and the Prodigals, as well as three permanent positions for the Faith, the Iron Guard, and the Crafter's Guild, filled by appropriate representatives(I have suggested the Archlector of Sentinel, the Lord Commander, and the Guildmaster). Yes, they already have a voice, each of these--but not a specific one.
The next two papers will be within the coming weeks, and will be upon the problems of Powers(and Rights) and Capability.
Jeremiah Arvani
Written By Magden
Jan. 18, 2017, 8:16 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
Written By Jeremiah
Jan. 18, 2017, 8:15 p.m.(9/13/1005 AR)
'Today--today, I discuss the first of our problems--my words are my own, and only my own. Let me begin with two quotes:
'Any Council that is restricted to the commons of your society will be, by its very nature, a placebo. Something that you think has efficacy, but does not. Without some inherent way to interact with the higher levels of your government, it will be nothing more than a place your complaints go to die.'
Elsewhere, the Common Council has been compared to 'a Great Lord walking into a forge or a masonry and seeking to advise the artisan on their craft.'
Skepticism is indeed warranted. I myself share it. I stand in opposition to the potential uselessness of this organ of the government, and will do all in my power and ability to form something stronger and better. If I do not or cannot--I will resign. I will find another battle if I am found unfit for this one.
From these two quotes come three problems--I will pick them apart and engage them, one-by-one. If the positions themselves are not appropriately representative? The Common Council will be worthless. If those holding the positions are not appropriately capable? The Common Council will be worthless. If the Common Council itself has neither rights nor powers? It will be worthless. These are the three problems I wrestle with as regards the Common Council.
Let us discuss then suitability: a High Lord walking into a forge. To put many commoners in a position of authority would be to do likewise--we are groomed neither for command nor a great education in many cases. These are not jobs your average baker is meant for. How, then, do we find councilors of skill, ability, relevance, and will?
[The paper takes some time to explain both representation and sortition--elections and random lots as a means of drawing willing participants. Both are dismissed rather quickly.]
While various philosophers have suggested either as a means of solving political problems, neither fits here--no. As the Common Councilors already selected were appointed, I suspect that most Councilors should be appointed--for their expertise. I will leave it to the Crown to determine an individual Councilor's capability--save that they should.
Crownlanders, Oathlanders, Northerners, Lycenes, and Islanders--also, potentially Prodigals. These core groups ought to be represented among the Common Council--for problems far afield and those representing commoners inside Arx itself, and representing those of their wards, as well. Additionally, the Buroughs(Lower and Upper, I would suggest) should be represented. These should be the permanent seats to the Council--plus three. The Iron Guard, the Faith, and the Crafters' Guild are all well-represented, and have a voice--but I believe they should be represented on the Common Council. Eleven seats to be filled(a high number, yet four are already filled, essentially. I believe the Archlector of the Sentinel should represent the Faith--making five. This leaves six seats to be filled(one for each of Arvum's regions/Arx's major wards, and additionally a representative from the Upper Buroughs--making Julea Sanguine and myself Councilors from the Lower Buroughs and Prodigals respectively).
Is this too many? Perhaps. But I return to my Maxim--if the positions are not appropriately representative, then the Common Council will be useless. These positions are appropriately representative--perhaps we can remove the Great Houses/regional wards. But it is better to begin grand and trim back, I believe.
I do not think it wise to budge or move from having each Councilor representative of a region/social group--this is one of the outward tests of competence. It will be readily evident when a man misrepresentative of the Lower Buroughs--whatever his capability--is appointed of the position. Likewise with any other area. Misuse and misappointment in the Common Council should be obvious, and being more than simply a Councilor--being, instead, a Councilor tied to a specific duty and purpose?
This is essential.
More will be done--more will be said. But that is all for now.
[It ends signed 'Jeremiah Arvani,' and nothing more.]
Written By Percephon
Jan. 18, 2017, 7:58 p.m.(9/12/1005 AR)
Written By Magden
Jan. 18, 2017, 7:44 p.m.(9/12/1005 AR)
If the Pantheon intends to smite it, I think it's important to know the size of the fireball.
We should consider summering in Gemecitta.
Written By Magden
Jan. 18, 2017, 7:34 p.m.(9/12/1005 AR)
Relationship Note on Eudence
Written By Neve
Jan. 18, 2017, 7:12 p.m.(9/12/1005 AR)
Written By Silas
Jan. 18, 2017, 6:46 p.m.(9/12/1005 AR)
The duel could have been honored - no one should make a threat they're incapable of carrying out - but it sounds more like it would just be a delayed execution more than a legitimate duel. I would not slaughter someone with a magical sword and feel like I've been avenged, but yeah, different standards I guess.
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